part 2:home sweet home
It was finally home time and everyone went completely bonkers because of the
home time excitement that always happens in my class at home time. my mum
came to pick me up from school and she was so cold that she was wearing
three pairs of pants four jackets and two pairs of socks. She was absolutely
covered in clothes like literally the only thing u could see was her face. When we
got home (which was after like five minutes) i found out mum hid my computer
so we could spend some quality time together (well with my family). I didn't
really care because family are better . mum was setting my house up so we can
have some guests over then asked me if i could get her phone for her. I went
into mum's bedroom and rummaged thru her purse but her phone wasn’t there
so i asked mum where it was. Then she looked at me then said i thought i said
that they were in my handbag. I looked at her like something really bad
happened for a moment then after a while i said mum i looked in there do u
think u left them at school or your phone got stolen...
Mum rushed to her handbag and grabbed it then went outside (that's not right rewind that) Mum grabbed her handbag then rushed to open the door and got covered in snow (now that seems right so let's stick with that) .
home time excitement that always happens in my class at home time. my mum
came to pick me up from school and she was so cold that she was wearing
three pairs of pants four jackets and two pairs of socks. She was absolutely
covered in clothes like literally the only thing u could see was her face. When we
got home (which was after like five minutes) i found out mum hid my computer
so we could spend some quality time together (well with my family). I didn't
really care because family are better . mum was setting my house up so we can
have some guests over then asked me if i could get her phone for her. I went
into mum's bedroom and rummaged thru her purse but her phone wasn’t there
so i asked mum where it was. Then she looked at me then said i thought i said
that they were in my handbag. I looked at her like something really bad
happened for a moment then after a while i said mum i looked in there do u
think u left them at school or your phone got stolen...
Mum rushed to her handbag and grabbed it then went outside (that's not right rewind that) Mum grabbed her handbag then rushed to open the door and got covered in snow (now that seems right so let's stick with that) .
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